Times move on leaving me behind the edge
Leaving with the memories of the gone,
Leaving to the world of unknown, you move to the fore
Swift with fiery as you thrash the once known & dear
Leaving me powerless to act, broken & wounded
Unable to heal the broken memories; you the great healer
Will you ever come back to take me with you;
Or will you leave me to seize the time!
Been to watch “Yeh Jawani” movie today, loved it for some
superb acting & some lovely not so stereotype moments! Funny, but it made me look back to the time
that had quite faded knowingly or unknowingly – reminding me of some wonderful
people I had met & made friendship with! But what i remembered most was my days
with R & V, though what pinched me the most was that those days won’t come
again. Though i have million happiest moments after that, i still have the best
ones with them. Life is intriguingly
tough & surprisingly ruthless, but then we always hope!
Oh i changed my blog name – after so much thought – felt the
current one suits it better, though loved it when people called me Devilish!
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12 comments:
Nice poem..sometimes moving on isn't that easy
hey buddy congrats on blog name change..:)i had requested u months ago on that hehe..u r a wonderful blog friend and devilish even for fun does not make me comfortable..wishes yar:)
U gvn such profound meaning to those timeless moments & memories , i really admire this superb write . Many to say bt i dnt i thnk tat wl enough. thx for sharing more of ur impressive & quality work. :)
very nice poem,,,.. thanks a lot for dropping by my blog and for the lovely comment.... just followed you, hope you follow back....
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beingbeautifulandpretty.com
Some friends leave a strong mark in our lives, for us to continue to cherish our times together!
C'est la vie! Beautifully poignant, temptingly brutal.. we love it, live it and keep looking back!
Your words capture the anguish of moving back and forth in time really well!
Keep writing :)
@Jeeves
:) Thanks, true indeed!
@Ramesh,
Glad u liked the name :) Lot of my friends were pushing for the same, finally i thought to listen for a gud cause.. cheers :)
@Vikash
:) Thank u so much.. Gr8 to know that u liked my writing..
@Pooja
Thanks a lot pooja n welcome to my blog :)
@Nikita
:) Thanks, friends always leav a mark in our lives..
@Beauty & the Beast
:) Thanks, glad u liked it & welcome to my blog. Some timeless memories scribbled..
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