Ruminations enthralling my world
Open, yet powerless by the melancholy of the unspoken words
So near, yet far, was it destined this way?
To fade away with the time even before it begin
Only to be remembered for the eternities like a timeless tale.
Leaving me wondering, was it my first love, or just an obsession?
17 comments:
Aah...thankfully i never have to say that about my first love coz he's still by my side. :)
Never the less....very beautifully written.
Thats too painful situation.. Beautifully written, few words, very expressive..
wow..this reminds me of AHEM AHEM..forget it..wheres the tissue?
beauuuuuuutiful words.
Your posts dont suggest that you r devil's incarnate.
Either change your poems or change your title or alias or pen name
:)
i think love is an obsession, but first love is just sweet, n always to be remembered tat way :D
you know it was love
this is so sad... and I can understand you more than you could ever expected...
Ah....First loves....Sigh i can say the same about mine....I so know the feeling.
@ Ria
:)Hmmm yeh .. thx dear n tc.
@Anon
:) Thnk u, n thx for dropping by
@Madhu
:) ah its here dear...
@Muddassir
:) thnx dear.. thx to my wickedness n devilish activities, i do hav that pen name through my frnds, though i would love to tell ppl that i'm very much angelic..
@Jane
That true, its like u wil remember forever..!
tc..
@ Shadow
:) Yss for sure.thnx 4 dropping by... n welcome to my blog
@Mademoiselle
Ths dear.. thats surely a vry painful phase..
@Scribbling girl
hmmm yep thats something i guess no one wants to pass through..
The answer really does ,live inside
You
with each beating of your heartbeat ,every breath ,you take .
You know it was and is Love
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