Sipping a cup of coffee, sitting by the window side
Watching the world passing by, with laughter and fun,
Not seeing a single teary eye, I wonder,
Did they notice the lone girl standing next to window pane?
Or did they just left her to enjoy her solitude
Watching the world passing by, with laughter and fun,
Not seeing a single teary eye, I wonder,
Did they notice the lone girl standing next to window pane?
Or did they just left her to enjoy her solitude
She was thinking about you all the while,
Wishing you had come out of the veil
And take her back to your world
Even if that takes her life, coz
Time is moving, taking her along with it.
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i can sense that it came straight from the heart... i dunno but many times i feel like this...at times when i want to be alone, but together i feel people shud come n console me... confused haan ??? !!
jus keep chill and relax..someday someone..will surely come and "notice the lone girl standing next to wondow pane"...
i wish ur thoughts are answered..else always we fella bloggers exist...
something that occupies my mind .!
Recently i have arranged a bean bag near window to spend my lone moments with a cuppa coffee ,observing the outside world from the window..
But for me i feel more comfortable to spend that time without anyone noticing me..few moments of escape ..few moments of silence..i love it for all the serenity it bestows me with
your post is very thoughtful Dear..:)
:)
if this teary eyed girl were to pass by some other teary eyed soul standing by the window, would she go ahead and help them out?
like someone has said, life is a comedy in long shot n tragedy in close up. though everyone has problems we tend to shw a happy mask to others..
i hope her wish is fulfilled :)
I hope the lone girl near the window heard some music and cheered up.
I hope she decided to move from the window and take a walk...
I hope she joined in the laughter and fun,
and discovered the task was an easy one
at least easier than she thought
to not let time take her
but to grab the moment, every little moment,
with delighted smiles...
Didn't wait for someone to take her back to the world,
But took the world back from her solitude...
The most important thing in poetry is emotions put into words. Yours is full of them.
Brings some feeling of sadness along with it.
and that picture just goes along with the mood you have set in the poem..so well put piece...
@Simba Tago
Yeh most of the time we prefer 2 be alone whn we hav a bad mood..
bt i guess there r times we wish smeone just came n took u out of that bad mood, coz u couldnt help urself...
:) thnk u... tc
@Vyshu
:)Thx dear... i guess everyone need sme moments of solitude...
@ Dhanya.
:) Take care...
@Usha
:) it depends like, bt i think i hav felt many times, this weird feeling of disturbing ppl frm their thoughts and talk 2 them...
@Amal
I think she managed to get out herself coz none really noticed her existence... :)
@Indianhomemaker
:) I hope she did all that u wished..
@Lena..
:) thx.. i think poems r incomplete without emotions..
@Mathew
:) thnk u...
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