Enthralling those moments we shared,
i thought it wil never end,
but for a moment of ignorance,
you made me a total stranger.
Here I am, like a kid in a crowd,
searching for a way,only to find dead ends.
I thought you will hold me, when I fall
but all I could see is a familiar face,
walking away from my view.
I wanted to share a million things,
but all i could hear was nothing but silence.
i thought it wil never end,
but for a moment of ignorance,
you made me a total stranger.
Here I am, like a kid in a crowd,
searching for a way,only to find dead ends.
I thought you will hold me, when I fall
but all I could see is a familiar face,
walking away from my view.
I wanted to share a million things,
but all i could hear was nothing but silence.
12 comments:
oh man!!! that was awesome...sad yet so beautiful!!
superb! do write more poetry
Tragic.. :(
Bootiful.. No other words.. I wish if it was a lengthy one.
Cheers
Randeep
that was a beautiful piece!! :)
cheers
beautifully expressed..
good work :-)
tc
One could feel the pain from those words...
Amazing stuff :)
take care da...
cheers..
reely beautiful...
Beautifully crafted. Lot of depth and feel. Keep in coming!
you are tagged..
@ Mayz
Thx :)
@Praveen
:) thx, that was sort of trying..
@ Dhanya
:) I knw, things cant b happy always na..
@Randeep
:) thnk u
@Swetha
:) thnk u dear
@ Amal
:) thnk u
tc
@ Arv
:) thnk u. Somtimes writing is the best way to express..
@Priya
:) thx priya..
@Aswadhy
:)thnk u.. welcome..
@ Mathew
:) i will surely take it up..
Beautiful... gr8 choice of words...:)
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