June 4, 2009

Scribbling Ur Life..!!!

Those doors are finally closed
After waiting for the rain n sun,
Didn’t I warn you, the sun will burn you out?
And rain will tear away your ashes
Alas! I had some more time
But you see, it was not my fault,
I would have stopped,
I would have waited ,
But I didn’t see you
I was so busy living my life
That I forgot to see through yours.

10 comments:

Amal Bose said...

quite true..
all of us are so busy with our own lives that we fail to see those in need of help..
nice work :)

Tara said...

Waah ji waah! Kya baat hai! :) Beautiful Ms.Pillai! :) And very true too, we get so busy in our own webs that we never seem to find out what other spiders have been up to! Eww...creepy! ;P

Ki said...

Nice. :)

Arv said...

hmmm... interesting note there...

take care mate... cheers...

Devil Incarnate... said...

@amal bose
:) thx
@ tara
:) thx tara, n good 2 c u back after ur long absence..
@Ki
:) thnk u
@Arv
:) thx arv, thnk u 4 droping by..

Voices within me said...

Very well written.. i think all of us afte a point can feel all thats in the poem... SUPERB!!

Lena said...

sometimes our life goes parallel to the life of those who we feel should be close to us, then we just lose them till it is too late..

good poem here :)

Jinxed Pixie said...

Nice one!

:)

Really really really well written!

santasizing...Fantasizing said...

lovely:)

Pretty Me!! said...

It touched me somewhere deep ... nice !!