August 10, 2009

Against all the Odds

Days passed, seasons changed, clouds went,
Bringing back the sunshine, time is moving
And I was here all the while waiting
But you never noticed, you never realized,
You were too busy searching for your small boat,
While the ship was leaving the shore
Now I can’t see you, distance has blurred my eyes
Time is ticking; I need to move on, every one needs to;
By the time you find me, there won’t be anything left,
But ashes, only to be washed away in the next rain.

19 comments:

Vyshu said...

Wonderful ..:)

I loved your way of expressing emotions..

**ou were too busy searching for your small boat,
While the ship was leaving the shore

Touching one..painful as i read this..:(

Mayz said...

that was touchin...vy touchin!!

Dhanya said...

Sad..

:(

Praveen said...

so much of pain...
but very well expressed

Priya Joyce said...

sad...ahhh....
*touched*

Arv said...

wow... touching :)

but yeah... thats the reality too...

Ria said...

wow!!tht was beautifully written....very touching poem i must say.

Americanising Desi said...

i never do have enuf esp in love like i mentioned earlier on in my post :)

thank you for visitin me and liftin my spirits up!

i think i have a disease... which is call 'never enough'.. so no matter how many people come in, there is always room for more. esp FRIENDS :)

so make urself at home!

and enuf abt my brag!

this was painful yet very heart felt! i felt a beat again in my heart! it hasnt been feelin for a while. so all credit to you for makin the miracle happen!

hugs!

Americanising Desi said...

http://sixsentences.ning.com/profiles/blogs/this-is-what-it-has-come-to

do check the link!
it is my take on something similar :)

Randeep said...

well written.. nice.

Cheers
Randeep

Devil Incarnate... said...

@vyshu
:) thnks vyshu.. i hav seen ppl concentrating on smal things that they leave the important things in life n later regret...

Devil Incarnate... said...

@Mayz
:) thnx mayz

Devil Incarnate... said...

@dhanya
it is sad indeed.. hpe u liked it..

Devil Incarnate... said...

@Praveen
:) thnks .. sme things in life r sad bt touching...

Devil Incarnate... said...

@Priya
:) thx... tc

Devil Incarnate... said...

@Arv
:) thx.. hpe u liked it..
like u told sme thing r sad, bt truth..

Devil Incarnate... said...

@Ria
:) thx a lot tia..

Devil Incarnate... said...

@Americanising desi
:) thx a lot dear..
hpe u liked my writing...

Devil Incarnate... said...

@randeep
:) thx a lot...