Days passed, seasons changed, clouds went,
Bringing back the sunshine, time is moving
And I was here all the while waiting
But you never noticed, you never realized,
You were too busy searching for your small boat,
While the ship was leaving the shore
Now I can’t see you, distance has blurred my eyes
Time is ticking; I need to move on, every one needs to;
By the time you find me, there won’t be anything left,
But ashes, only to be washed away in the next rain.
Bringing back the sunshine, time is moving
And I was here all the while waiting
But you never noticed, you never realized,
You were too busy searching for your small boat,
While the ship was leaving the shore
Now I can’t see you, distance has blurred my eyes
Time is ticking; I need to move on, every one needs to;
By the time you find me, there won’t be anything left,
But ashes, only to be washed away in the next rain.
19 comments:
Wonderful ..:)
I loved your way of expressing emotions..
**ou were too busy searching for your small boat,
While the ship was leaving the shore
Touching one..painful as i read this..:(
that was touchin...vy touchin!!
Sad..
:(
so much of pain...
but very well expressed
sad...ahhh....
*touched*
wow... touching :)
but yeah... thats the reality too...
wow!!tht was beautifully written....very touching poem i must say.
i never do have enuf esp in love like i mentioned earlier on in my post :)
thank you for visitin me and liftin my spirits up!
i think i have a disease... which is call 'never enough'.. so no matter how many people come in, there is always room for more. esp FRIENDS :)
so make urself at home!
and enuf abt my brag!
this was painful yet very heart felt! i felt a beat again in my heart! it hasnt been feelin for a while. so all credit to you for makin the miracle happen!
hugs!
http://sixsentences.ning.com/profiles/blogs/this-is-what-it-has-come-to
do check the link!
it is my take on something similar :)
well written.. nice.
Cheers
Randeep
@vyshu
:) thnks vyshu.. i hav seen ppl concentrating on smal things that they leave the important things in life n later regret...
@Mayz
:) thnx mayz
@dhanya
it is sad indeed.. hpe u liked it..
@Praveen
:) thnks .. sme things in life r sad bt touching...
@Priya
:) thx... tc
@Arv
:) thx.. hpe u liked it..
like u told sme thing r sad, bt truth..
@Ria
:) thx a lot tia..
@Americanising desi
:) thx a lot dear..
hpe u liked my writing...
@randeep
:) thx a lot...
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