August 6, 2009

Before Final Fall..!

Finally its time for farewell
And give way to time.
I had stood there, victoriously with time
Without any fear, majestically with all the grace
But You, The One, who came yesterday-
can never take my place, though you will stay.
With me lie the memories of years-
Those golden days of childhood,
With all the freedom and liberty
The joy of unity and togetherness
And the feeling of being at home
You will be there reminded as a building
But I will always live to be known Home.
I dont think, i will be happy to see my moms house with its new look. Its like someone taking a part of your body and giving back in pieces.
Disclaimer : Pic is taken through google images

14 comments:

lena said...

thats really a thoughtful one. Not the 4 walls make a house home, but the people, their emotions, togetherness and memories... one can never forget such a place.

RukmaniRam said...

the verses are great! me likey!

Also, so are the photographs. are they yours?

Arv said...

gracefully yet sad....

diff tone... liked it :)

Srishti Menin said...

wow.. good lines, u r changing ur home yeh someone else is changing??
the feelings hav been put together so nicely..

Usha said...

hmm.. well said girl..
right now it seems like we r going lose our paternal home. sad, it is.
i somehow have this urge to go get all those lovely wooden pillars, we used to run around. pity i cant just go, pick them up and put them in the cupboard. sigh!

Anonymous said...

Great verses...thoughtful one..!

loved the way you said abt the four walls which is not just built to stay in...which is made of emotions,relations,love and dependence..

very well said dear

Timeless Memories - My Bygone ! said...

@lena
yeh very true...
thx

Timeless Memories - My Bygone ! said...

@rukmini
thx.. gud to knw tat u liked it..
the photographs r nt mine.. the house was lookin similar to my granny's one...

Timeless Memories - My Bygone ! said...

@Arv
:)thx..
it was diferent.. frm wt i usualy think..

take care..

Timeless Memories - My Bygone ! said...

@Srishti
:)thx da.. gr8 to knw u liked..
i am nt changing, my paternal home was getting rennovated...
hope 2 c u more here...

Timeless Memories - My Bygone ! said...

@Usha
yeh.. tats exactly wt i am also feeling like doing...
i learned the meaning of 'home' staying there...

Timeless Memories - My Bygone ! said...

@Vyshu
:) thx.. ofcourse 4 wall can never make home, its coz of the ppl...

S said...

Home !!

If you go thru my blog, i'm another human being who just can't live without that so called 'building' .. I can understand your views and by the way that was a lovely way of expressing your love for the nest ! :)

And my blog is updated too, do come:
In love with me and life

Dhanya said...

u so well said it.. walls can never make a home.. it's the people, emotions n memories that make it..