Morning rays peeks in evoking me,
waking me up
ending my long deep slumber and dreams
as I slowly realize that its just me and my solitude
You have been long gone, leaving the memories-
of a life behind, on a journey of no return
I walk around looking for you, hoping to
see you play hide n seek, unable find
wishing you unveil yourself yelling my name-
like always as look in astonishment trying to touch you
Silence scares as the once grin face on the portrait-
looking impassive at my teary face; I know
there will be no come back, as the numbness
pull me back to the slumber, I wish as I close my eyes
never to wake up again to see the musings of a solitary soul!
Photo Courtesy - deviantart.com
ending my long deep slumber and dreams
as I slowly realize that its just me and my solitude
You have been long gone, leaving the memories-
of a life behind, on a journey of no return
I walk around looking for you, hoping to
see you play hide n seek, unable find
wishing you unveil yourself yelling my name-
like always as look in astonishment trying to touch you
Silence scares as the once grin face on the portrait-
looking impassive at my teary face; I know
there will be no come back, as the numbness
pull me back to the slumber, I wish as I close my eyes
never to wake up again to see the musings of a solitary soul!
PS: Sometimes long journeys invoke lot of thoughts in your mind, thankfully all ends well :)
Photo Courtesy - deviantart.com
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13 comments:
Very nice.
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nice lines... (you cannot get a more elaborate comment from a poetically-challenged person like me) :)
deep:)
To be alone in silence is not easy.. and it takes a lot of time getting used to. The long lines make it a little prosaic, but a lovely verse nevertheless. Thanks.
I think when we are alone mind does go and wander in all directions ..
loved the poem and what a beautiful picture to accompany
Bikram's
of late, i have started enjoying solitude..it is abs agaianst my nature..wonder y...
Nice and deep lines.
@ Amrit
:) Thank u so much for the comment n welcome to my space!
@ Muhammad
Thanks a ton! Cant get a better compliment :)
@ Ramesh
Thnx :)
@ Leo
Very true indeed! :) Thnx for the honest comment n welcome to my space!
@ Bikram
You are perfectly correct, it happens to all of us.. :) tc
@ Ria
:) Thx dear..
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