May 21, 2012

Musings of a Solitary Soul !!!

Morning rays peeks in evoking me, waking me up
ending my long deep slumber and dreams
as I slowly realize that its just me and my solitude
You have been long gone, leaving the memories-
of a life behind, on a journey of no return
I walk around looking for you, hoping to 
see you play hide n seek, unable find
wishing you unveil yourself yelling my name-
like always as look in astonishment trying to touch you
Silence scares as the once grin face on the portrait-
looking impassive at my teary face; I know
there will be no come back, as the numbness
pull me back to the slumber, I wish as I close my eyes
never to wake up again to see the musings of a solitary soul!

PS: Sometimes long journeys invoke lot of thoughts in your mind, thankfully all ends well :)

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Amrit said...

Very nice.

(Can you please remove these words to takes longer to enter the comment. Also google catches spam anyway) Three attempts already...but last one

Misterio Vida said...

nice lines... (you cannot get a more elaborate comment from a poetically-challenged person like me) :)

R. Ramesh said...


Vinay Leo R. said...

To be alone in silence is not easy.. and it takes a lot of time getting used to. The long lines make it a little prosaic, but a lovely verse nevertheless. Thanks.

Bikram said...

I think when we are alone mind does go and wander in all directions ..

loved the poem and what a beautiful picture to accompany


R. Ramesh said...

of late, i have started enjoying is abs agaianst my nature..wonder y...

RiĆ  said...

Nice and deep lines.

Timeless Memories - My Bygone ! said...

@ Amrit
:) Thank u so much for the comment n welcome to my space!

Timeless Memories - My Bygone ! said...

@ Muhammad
Thanks a ton! Cant get a better compliment :)

Timeless Memories - My Bygone ! said...

@ Ramesh
Thnx :)

Timeless Memories - My Bygone ! said...

@ Leo
Very true indeed! :) Thnx for the honest comment n welcome to my space!

Timeless Memories - My Bygone ! said...

@ Bikram
You are perfectly correct, it happens to all of us.. :) tc

Timeless Memories - My Bygone ! said...

@ Ria
:) Thx dear..