November 19, 2010

Life is Calling..!



Rain started pouring heavily, she couldn’t see anything clearly. It’s already dark and the rain was making the journey difficult. She pushed the accelerator. She was not sure whether it’s the rain or the tears in her eyes that is making her difficult to see. She wanted to be strong, but this journey was making it difficult. Even the rain was not showing any mercy. She loved rain with all its beauty and madness, but now even that was sardonic. She pushed the accelerator once more, this time she was calm as all she saw was never-ending darkness as the rain washed away all the emotions.


“Yeh tumhari meri baatein hamesha yuhi chalti rahein……..”

All her thoughts were on hold with the phone buzz. Who is calling at this time, she muttered while checking her phone, she thought she switched off her mob. Oh it’s Papa! She was not ready, to pick the phone, she knew he will get the change of voice as always. He was good at understanding her though this time he made a mistake by thinking that she will be fine.

Now she was thinking about her papa and how he single handedly managed to bring her up. She knew that she is letting her father down. This was not the way her life was supposed to end. She was going to marry someone who loved her, was going to take up a job in her dream city but who twisted her fate.

Life was calling her again, she cant go on with the thoughts of her papa, she turned her car and picked up the phone..

“Hi Papa…”

25 comments:

Deepika Vasudeva said...

niceee... is it to be continued or not?... i wud like to read the continuation... :)
nicely written and emotions were FEEL-ABLE :)

cheers

Scribbling Girl said...

I wd want to read the continuation :)
Loved the way u penned it :)

Salman Saeed said...

I miss my Papa.
We are having Silent talks nowadays!
Pretty painful =(

I would want to read the continuation too =/

Bikramjit said...

good one .. fathers do so much fo the kids so it was good of the daughter to pick her dad's phone :)

liked the story ...

then what did papa say :)

Bikram's

Ria said...

Nice one....cant wait for it to continue.

P.S: I love ur new template.

Sh@s said...

Nice one. Waiting for the next part.

R. Ramesh said...

good one this of course..and hey buddy..buddy..plz plz u promised to listen to me as a good friend..this blog wil henceforth be called Angel incarnate..my buddies are all angels, not devils...hehe..sorry if i irritate u..but do consider my reqst:)

Srishti said...

Good one... neatly penned one full of emotions, is it to be continued or not?

Sourav said...

Tell me there is more to it?

Neeha said...

I am waiting for the next part..

Md. Muddassir Shah said...

Lovely,
That was a nice read :)

sm said...

nice story

Devil Incarnate... said...

@ Dear All - There wont be any continuation, as i felt its better to leave it to the readers abt the future of the gal...!

Devil Incarnate... said...

@ Deepika
:) Thx dear, i wanted to leave it like that, without a continueation...

Devil Incarnate... said...

@ Scribbling gal
:) thx dear, i knw many wnted to read the continuation, though sme hw i felt it wont go in a nice way..

Devil Incarnate... said...

@ Salman
Life hav taught b the best lesson to be open to the ones i'm close to.. u might regret later otherwise..

Devil Incarnate... said...

@ Bikramjit

:) thx.. ys i would definitely say papas r always there for their kids..
i hope to think that her papa was able to bring her back to life..

Devil Incarnate... said...

@ Ria
:) thx a tonne dear for both.. :)

Devil Incarnate... said...

@ Shas
:) Thnk u...

Devil Incarnate... said...

@ Ramesh
:) thx.. i knw.. one fine day i might surprise u by changing :)

Devil Incarnate... said...

@ Srishti
:) thx dear.. i guess nt :(

Devil Incarnate... said...

@ Sourav
:) i thought it was better to leav to ur imagination to think in a positive way or otherwise..

Devil Incarnate... said...

@ Neeha
:) thx dear.. n welcome to my blog..

Devil Incarnate... said...

@ Mudassir
:) thnk u so much dear..

Devil Incarnate... said...

@ SM
:) thnk u...