December 8, 2010

Time... You Lost!


Time, the great healer, there you stand!

Like the warrior who lost the battle-

Unable to mend the broken soul

Oh! The pieces are crushed all way

With nothing left but imperfections

But I was meant to live with the odds

Though you took your precious time to seize

What a waste it has been, I knew it all the way!

 
Pic Courtesy - Deviantart.com

17 comments:

Anonymous said...

Wish i could help you out, but then you wanted to do things your way.. loved ur poem
and u hav a great blog here..! TC

Deepika Vasudeva said...

"But I was meant to live with the odds"- beautifully crafted and rightfully said... keep writing :)

Blasphemous Aesthete said...

Battle is not lost until the warrior stands. Maybe, another push and the odd are down.
Not worth it? I don't think it's the choice that you have to make. Let the warrior decide.


Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete

D.A said...

Hmm..time has been kind to me :) first time here...lovely template.

Madhu said...

well written..i am learning to appreciate peotry

Bikramjit said...

TIME is an an angel.. it does beautiful things ...

But even time cant change what has happened the hurt the trust that has gone .. If only we humans are good enough to know we have done wrong and try to change the wrong ..


then we might not haveto wait for TIME to heal all..

Scribbling Girl said...

wow so true...i cd relate to it all...

but then ultimately we all get healed even if partially...

Sourav C. Pandey said...

"You can't change the past, but you can ruin the present by worrying about the future" ..overused quotes, yet true!

And this was a really expressive post :)

Devil Incarnate... said...

@ Anon
:) thnk u so much... tc

Devil Incarnate... said...

@Deepika
:) thnx dear, that line is my fav too..

Devil Incarnate... said...

@Blasphemous,
:) yeh nw that wat i will call hope! something that goes along with time...

Devil Incarnate... said...

@ DA
:)lucky one.. n thnx...

Devil Incarnate... said...

@Madhu
Hmmm thnx dear.. gud 2 c u back..

Devil Incarnate... said...

@ Bikramjit
i completely go with u.. so true..

Devil Incarnate... said...

@ Scribbling girl
right, after all time is known for that healing powers.. thnx dear..

Devil Incarnate... said...

@ Sourav
Beautiful quote, and very true..!
thnx dear n tc..

A said...

Very good.