Time, the great healer, there you stand!
Like the warrior who lost the battle-
Unable to mend the broken soul
Oh! The pieces are crushed all way
With nothing left but imperfections
But I was meant to live with the odds
Though you took your precious time to seize
What a waste it has been, I knew it all the way!
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Wish i could help you out, but then you wanted to do things your way.. loved ur poem
and u hav a great blog here..! TC
"But I was meant to live with the odds"- beautifully crafted and rightfully said... keep writing :)
Battle is not lost until the warrior stands. Maybe, another push and the odd are down.
Not worth it? I don't think it's the choice that you have to make. Let the warrior decide.
Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete
Hmm..time has been kind to me :) first time here...lovely template.
well written..i am learning to appreciate peotry
TIME is an an angel.. it does beautiful things ...
But even time cant change what has happened the hurt the trust that has gone .. If only we humans are good enough to know we have done wrong and try to change the wrong ..
then we might not haveto wait for TIME to heal all..
wow so true...i cd relate to it all...
but then ultimately we all get healed even if partially...
"You can't change the past, but you can ruin the present by worrying about the future" ..overused quotes, yet true!
And this was a really expressive post :)
@ Anon
:) thnk u so much... tc
@Deepika
:) thnx dear, that line is my fav too..
@Blasphemous,
:) yeh nw that wat i will call hope! something that goes along with time...
@ DA
:)lucky one.. n thnx...
@Madhu
Hmmm thnx dear.. gud 2 c u back..
@ Bikramjit
i completely go with u.. so true..
@ Scribbling girl
right, after all time is known for that healing powers.. thnx dear..
@ Sourav
Beautiful quote, and very true..!
thnx dear n tc..
Very good.
Time in a way is a healer but with distractions,time passes by but we never forget how we have been wronged, yes you are right bikramjit,once the trust has gone your lives have changed forever,life as you knew it has been destroyed and you are left with the pain, the hurt caused by your loved one,but its a choice you made at that time in your life, not once but twice, then one is left with consequences and the loved one betrayed is left to heal from something that was not their fault, very sad, one must make their own decision for their future in order to survive and heal with time.
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