July 30, 2009

You, My Life

Every day I wake up to your call,
Patiently trying to wake me up

Everyday I close my eyes
Seeing your good night messages

Everyday I start my day
Taking your wishes for a good day

Everyday you listen to my stories
Without a trace of irritation

Everyday you call me up
To be sure that I am fine

You have never asked for anything
You have never lost your temper
You have always accepted me as it is
You have always ignored my shortcomings

You have never stopped loving me
I wonder now, what if you were not there

What if I never got those messages?
What if you never called me up?

What if you never heard me out?
What if you never prayed for me?

Oh mine! I know its coz of you, I live,
That’s what makes you, My Life.

11 comments:

Vyshu said...

Deep touching poem..! I so cud relate to this loving one...For every line i was just nodding my head..

you put in in a nice way ..:)

Keep writing Dear..!

Vinz aka Vinu said...

:)

Dont think about 'What If's...

Nicely written..emotions portrayed well..!!

vinz

Rane (The Orchid with All Shades Pink) said...

awweee how sweet!! keep smiling..

Priya Joyce said...

ahhhhhh....niiiiice re...
somethng similr to my life..nw..
n I'd die if i dun get those calls n messgs :)
beautiful :)

Arv said...

life... oh life :)

beautiful :)

take care..

cheers...

Swetha Padakandla said...

nice piece!

words put in so nicely.. keep going! :)

usha said...

even if the messages stop, the calls never come, they stop listening or praying, we know that life will still go on.. it has to, isn't it?

lovely piece, this one! :)

Amal Bose said...

such a nice poem..
keep writing :)

Esther said...

Believe me, this post relates to me, like very! =)

Devil Incarnate... said...

@Vyshu
:)thx dear..
tc

@ Vinz
thx..
u knw life is full of Ifs and Buts

@Rane
:)thx..

@Priya
Thx yaar..
i knw, i can understand.

@Arv
:) thnk u
Take care..

@Swetha
:)thx.
gud 2 knw tat u liked it..

@Usha
ofcourse.. life goes on, nomatter wt..
i have seen it so many times..

@Amal
:)Thx yaar

@Esther
:)thx..
i thought it related to me only.. :)

Americanising Desi said...

MY GODDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD!!!!

this ripped me entirely!!!
not in a bad way at all :D

loved it!