Every day I wake up to your call,Patiently trying to wake me up
Everyday I close my eyes
Seeing your good night messages
Everyday I start my day
Taking your wishes for a good day
Everyday you listen to my stories
Without a trace of irritation
Everyday you call me up
To be sure that I am fine
You have never asked for anything
You have never lost your temper
You have always accepted me as it is
You have always ignored my shortcomings
You have always ignored my shortcomings
You have never stopped loving me
I wonder now, what if you were not there
What if I never got those messages?
What if you never called me up?
What if you never heard me out?
What if you never prayed for me?
Oh mine! I know its coz of you, I live,
That’s what makes you, My Life.
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11 comments:
Deep touching poem..! I so cud relate to this loving one...For every line i was just nodding my head..
you put in in a nice way ..:)
Keep writing Dear..!
:)
Dont think about 'What If's...
Nicely written..emotions portrayed well..!!
vinz
awweee how sweet!! keep smiling..
ahhhhhh....niiiiice re...
somethng similr to my life..nw..
n I'd die if i dun get those calls n messgs :)
beautiful :)
life... oh life :)
beautiful :)
take care..
cheers...
nice piece!
words put in so nicely.. keep going! :)
even if the messages stop, the calls never come, they stop listening or praying, we know that life will still go on.. it has to, isn't it?
lovely piece, this one! :)
such a nice poem..
keep writing :)
Believe me, this post relates to me, like very! =)
@Vyshu
:)thx dear..
tc
@ Vinz
thx..
u knw life is full of Ifs and Buts
@Rane
:)thx..
@Priya
Thx yaar..
i knw, i can understand.
@Arv
:) thnk u
Take care..
@Swetha
:)thx.
gud 2 knw tat u liked it..
@Usha
ofcourse.. life goes on, nomatter wt..
i have seen it so many times..
@Amal
:)Thx yaar
@Esther
:)thx..
i thought it related to me only.. :)
MY GODDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD!!!!
this ripped me entirely!!!
not in a bad way at all :D
loved it!
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